Monday, November 24, 2008

WA 3 draft1

I thought I knew you

But I guess I was wrong

I thought you knew how I was feeling

But I guess I was wrong

I thought you were nicer, and had a heart

But I guess I was wrong

You changed ever since she came into your life, I thought it wouldn’t last

But I guess I was wrong

You once said not to get to close…


So I guess you were right

1 comment:

Ms. Wiesner said...

This would be stronger if your refrain "I guess I was wrong" changes slightly each time. Like, "I guess I didn't see clear," or "I guess my heart was mistaken."

I like the ending. But I'm not seeing the connection with peace clearly here. Bring that out.